Alfonse Alborn
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Join date : 2010-05-04
 |  Subject: Alfonse Alborn  Thu May 06, 2010 3:16 pm | |
| Name: Alfonse
Age: 365Visual Age: 21
Gender: Male
Birthday: January 15
Height: 6’0’’
Weight: 150 Ibs
Eyes: Aqua Green
Hair: Raven Black
Blood Type: AB Positive
Affiliation: Gotei 13
Division: Unknown
Maritial Status: Single
Education: High School Level
Status: He's currently running Division 6 until he gains a Captain.
Relatives: Deceased
Appearance: Alfonse had a youthful appearance and was a fairly tall person, with white skin and aqua green eyes. Alfonse had spiky raven black hair. He wore the normal uniform with his lieutenants badge on his left arm as standard. He had a tattoo of the Alborn family crest on his arm.
Personality: He was a popular man who was very ethical and was adored by many of the 13th Division members. Alfonse was outspoken with a rough disposition, but his down-to-earth attitude is one of the reasons why everyone looked up to him. Alfonse treated his fellow company members indiscriminately, regardless of their social standing or rank. Cause of this, his fair attitude was popular among both aristocrats and commoners in his division.
He believed that one's heart relied on prospects of fighting and protecting. He firmly believed in his former Captain Ukitake and his policy on fighting, which lists the types of battle: the fight to protect life and the fight to protect honor. Alfonse took it a step further and believed they both end up being the same thing: heart. He believed that every time someone connected with one another, a little bit of heart is born between them. He thought of heart as not of something inside you, but what is born whenever you think of or remember someone. He believes that "heart" exists in them and remains with one's comrades after their death. As such Alfonse believes that people must never die alone.
It is known that his favorite food was ohagi and he liked to take afternoon naps if he could.
History: Alfonse was walking home from school one day when he saw a girl from one of his classes. He never really talked to her and figured now would be a good time to be friends. She turned a corner and Alfonse ran to catch up. Though when he too turned the corner he didn't see her, but heard a scream to his right. He was shocked...the scene before him was horribal. The girl was on her stomach and blood was oozing out of a wound that Alfonse could not see. He saw the man who did it and went an insane anger. He charged the man with his fist balled ready to hit him, but someone got to him first. Something nailed Alfonse in the back and he fell forward stunned. Before he even hit the floor a flash of silver clocked him in the head and the world began spinning int darkness.
He woke up and felt something warm and wet around him. It was blood. To his left and right were dirt walls and above him was a blue sky. He saw three men standing out side of the pit he was in. One was the man who murdered the girl, the other too held baseball bats. "So thats what hit me." he thought to himself. Then he felt a pulse and looked to his left. It was the girl! She was still alive! The man must have seen because he pulled out a gun...aimed at her and fired. Alfonse rolled over on top of her and soon after, something impaled him in the back which caused him to scream in pain. It was a bullet. Pain ripped through his body like fire. A second shot fired, and a third, and a fourth. Each more painful than the last.
He looked down at the girl with sympathy and tears. "I don't know if you can hear me...but I won't let you suffer.." Alfonse whispered as he began a fight for air. One of those bullets had hit his lungs. "I will share your pain...I will not let you die alone!" he screamed. The fifth shot fired and Alfonse rolled onto his back next to the girl. He stared up at the man, who had a grin on his face and I wild look on his face. Alfonse quickly annilized he was on drugs. His two henchmen began shoveling dirt over Alfonse and the girl, the girls name he finally remembered. He held her hand and whispered, "I won't let you die alone..." The girl stopped breathing and died with a smile on her face. Alfonse closed his eyes and whispered her name for the first time. "Amy....was your name..." He said with warmth as the last light of day faded under the cold dark soil that now covered them.....
Equipment: Lieutenant Badge, Zanpakutou.
Powers and Abilities
Flash Step Expert: Though not particularly versed in its various techniques, Alfonse has become proficient enough of the technique itself to keep up and even surprise high-level Shinigami with his speed. Even Byakuya Kuchiki, one of the most proficient users of Flash Steps in Soul Society, complimented Alfonse’s growing mastery of the technique. During his first demonstration of this skill, he was able to quickly move to knock out three lieutenants and grab his sword before any of them hit the ground.
Vaster Spiritual Pressure: Alfonse has been noted on several occasions to have tremendously vast levels of spiritual energy well beyond other Shinigami. He was capable of defeating a Gillian before awakening his true power with only his sealed Zanpakutō. Even at less than half strength, his spiritual energy is still comparable to a Captain-level fighter. His spiritual power is noted to be heavy, which surprised Renji Abarai a lieutenant ranked Shinigami. Alfonse constantly gives off reiatsu at the level of a captain. It is so overwhelming that even when worn-out in battle, he can continue fighting effectively while still capable of unleashing Wendeka Kenkai or even unleash and maintain his Bankai. Because Alfonse’s spiritual energy constantly being so high even at its base level without him consciously being aware of it, he rarely becomes exhausted in battle, thereby meaning the sheer resilience and amounts of energy Alfonse has is monstrous.However, he has learned how to harden his spiritual energy and enhance the strength of his attacks or act as a barrier to reduce the impact of attacks on him, if not negating them completely.
Enhanced Strength: Even without his Shinigami powers, Alfonse has shown himself to be deceptively strong, as shown from his ability to smash a man's head through a concrete floor. When he is in his Shinigami body, Alfonse's already impressive strength is greatly enhanced. His overall abilities are great enough that he was able to fend off three Shinigami lieutenants with a single punch each; one of which shattered one of their Zanpakutō at the same time. His strength is also great enough to stop repeated strikes from Yammy Rialgo who is known for his strength.
Enhanced Speed: Even before learning Flash Step, Alfonse has repeatedly shown himself to be a very agile fighter. Alfonse has demonstrated great reflexes in battle, able to quickly dodge a strike with no wasted effort and he can instantly counterattack right after.He is able to strike quickly without warning and in rapid succession. His speed also allows him to follow the movements of faster opponents to better analyze their movements or blocking difficult and otherwise fatal strikes.
Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Alfonse's skill with his sword was honed to a master level, due to the change between Divisions, letting him strike multiple times with changes of attack type (from slash to pierce) without any difficulty. His insane cutting strength is also evident as he is capable of easily cutting through an Espada's Hierro, which is harder than steel, as well as slicing apart a skyscraper with a mere flick of the wrist. Alfonse took the Captain Innitialization Exams for the 11th Division and passed the test, which specializes in sword fighting, he is one of the most, if not the most, proficient swordsmen in all of Soul Society.
Highly Perceptive Combatant: Despite his seeming disregard for any strategy in his fights and his self-admitted aversion to thinking during battle, Alfonse is a very insightful man, regularly showing more understanding than one would expect. Even Byakuya was impressed by Alfonse's ability to understand things he has no personal experience with. He is very adept at finding and exploiting weaknesses in his opponents' techniques. He is also adept at adjusting to his opponent's attack patterns and battle methods to better counter them. He has also demonstrated keenly sharp intuition to incoming danger.
Kidō Master: Alfonse has displayed his knowledge of high level Kido spells, able to cast several in quick succession without the incantation and with almost no effort and still possessing formidable power. He has been shown to use spells up to level 81 and possesses advanced knowledge of Kidō application and consistency. He can use low-level spells with devastating effects, as well as a counter to attacks.
Master Assassin: As a former high-ranking member of the Special Forces, Alfonse has high mastery in the art of assassination. He has repeatedly shown impressive skill in staying hidden and unseen while maneuvering to his target. During his battle against Yammy, he repeatedly was able to catch his opponent completely by surprise. Even the likes of the perceptive and intuitive Aizen was caught by surprise during the Gotei 13's victory over Aizen.
Zanpakutou: Alfonse's Zanpakutou Spirit is female, which is very rare for a male Shinigami. His Zanpakutou is also rare in the fact that it is a duel-weild type blade. Both his Katana's have a sphere shaped hilt that containes a special spirit energy used for two diffrent reasons. His left sword, contains a spirit energy in the form of a green liquid that is used to instantly heal the injuries it is poured on. His right Zanpakutou's gaurd sphere, contains a blue liquid that is highly explosive. By clicking his teeth, Alfonse and cause the liquid to explode and incinerate whatever it is touching. When not using his releases, Alfonse can coat his left sword with the green liquid and slice any injury on a man causing it to heal. If he has the blue liquid on his right Zanpakutou, whatever he slices will have to deal with both being sliced, and blown away.Shikai Command: "Bend the World to your will, Lunahime!" (Lunahime tranfers to Moon Princess)Shikai: By slamming both the hilts off his sword together, Alfonse's shikai extends into a large metalic black pole with a massive spear blade on it. It bears a horsehair tassel, although it is green instead of the traditional red. (Horsehair tassle is the little red fury things at the ends of Ikkaku's bankai.) Shikai Special Abilities: Alfonse's shikai grows in weight that equals out to 30-thousand pounds. His swords innate ability allows it to feel weightless, which grants Alfonse to swing at blinding speeds with immense strength and power.Wendeka Kenkai: At the instant of the slash Lunahime absorbs Alfonse's spiritual energy and releases highly condensed green spiritual energy at the tip of the blade. Magnifying the slash attack and then flies forward.This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or in the shape of a wave. As stated by his former Captain, knowing the name of an attack heightens its power compared to its strength when the wielder does not know its name. Wendeka Kenkai is a powerful technique with great force, capable of causing large scale damage. Alfonse has used this technique in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. He is also shown to control these blasts, and can even change the intensity of them. Alfonse was able to easily cancel out Cero and Bala blasts from the Espada Yammy Riyalgo by striking it head-on with this attack after he was able to study the amount of power it took to use it.
Saito: Lunahime's defensive ability forms an hexagonal-shaped shield of solidified energy in front of Alfonse. The barrier is able to easily block a direct punch from the immensely strong Yammy Rialgo and block Kazu Ikeda's "Pulse" attack while only slightly eroding, after which Alfonse comments that he would have died if not for the shield.
Bankai Name: "Kusari Lunahime" (Chain of the Moon Princess)
Bankai: Upon activation, his bankai unleashes a black (with green outline) burst of spiritual energy that falls around Alfonse as green rain. Once the rain falls, Alfonse's shinigami robe is replaced with a long-sleeved, ankle-length black coat (or shikakusho) with green lining that is closed at his chest, then left to flare out into ragged ends. The inside of his coat is green. His Zanpakutou. Kusari Lunahime has become a pair of huge, heavily-curved, black Chinese scimitars with metalic green edges. The hilt and tsuba of each are still the same as they were in Kusari Lunahime's sealed-form, but they now sport long green tassels dangling from the end. Each sword is larger than Alfonse himself and weigh 100 thousand pounds each. Bankai Special Ability: Kusari Lunahime much like its Shikai form is used largely for melee combat but possess certain special abilities. One of these abilities is for Alfonse to pour spirit energy into the green edges of the blade to intensify its sharpness. The sharpness of the blade combined with its weight and strength of Alfonse's swings claim almost any opponent. To Alfonse, like his Shikai, the both the blades are weightless which allows Alfonse to swing at incredibal speeds.[/size]Enhanced Wendeka Kenkai: Kusari Lunahime retains the use of Wendeka Kenkai and can be used in the same manners, but can be used in an enhanced form. When used in Bankai, these potent blasts are black with a green outline and their path can be controlled, with explosively augmented power and speed. Alfonse can also keep Wendeka Kenkai wrapped around Kusari Lunahime to augment his sword swings.
- Hyper-Speed Combat: Alfonse takes all the power of his Bankai and compresses it into a small, condense form. Then he uses the power of the Bankai to perform hyper speed combat. His new speed is so great, that it also enhances his Flash Step prowess and allows him to create dozens of afterimages to confuse his opponent.
- Enhanced Strength: Alfonse's Bankai also allows him to further enhance his natural great strength as shown from how effortlessly he blocked a punch from Yammy, an Espada known primarily for his immense strength. He is strong enough to cut through Yammy's Hierro with relative ease.
- Enhanced Spiritual Power: His reiatsu is intense and rough as well as thick and heavy that it can suffocate Humans by being the in general vicinity of his released Bankai. In addition, his already immense spiritual energy has grandly and explosively increased, and now has a deep black spiritual energy with a green outline. It has come to a point where the green-outlined black energy emanates off of Ichigo's body when his spiritual pressure is exerted, replacing his normal green aura.
- Enhanced Bankai Duration: Furthermore, the fact that all of his energy is "compressed" means that usage of his Bankai doesn't expel as much spiritual power as other Bankai from the point of activation; thus allowing him to use Kusari Lunahime at a much longer duration than "most" other Bankai users.
Senkeitso: This ability causes aqua green energy wings to sprout from Alfonse's back, these wings can be used as Alfonse's Ultimate defense when all others fail. Alfonse uses these wings for a number off attacks and also to fly away from attacks. By wrapping the wings around his body, Alfonse can withstand some of the most high calibur attacks dished out. But even these wings, have a limit. Senkei also gives Alfonse a long aqua green whip-like tail that can be used to hold people in place, choke them, and even pierce.
Gōkeitsu: This move causes both Alfonse's wings and tail to shatter into an un-countable number of tiny blades of energy, each about half an inch long. It creates a spherical formation of innumerable blade fragments, which swirl around the opponent like a cloud. It then flies into them from every possible angle, leaving no blind spots and no possibility to escape. It then collapses on itself, obliterating the opponent. It was strong enough to completely obliterate a very large building from the inside out, and the resulting shockwave generated by the attack is so powerful that Alfonse himself has to Flash Step away or face critical injuries.
Hokunosato:This condenses each and every single one of his blades into a massive sword made of spirit energy that stands the height of a skyscraper and drastically increasing its cutting power. The spiritual energy and pressure of this form released is immense. The energy blade appears black and green and its aura takes the form of bird. Green energy wings form on Alfone's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated spiritual energy. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause fatal injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight Whether or not this form allows only one single attack or more is as yet unknown.
(Note: Alfonse is new to Bankai and is still learning its techniques.)
RP Sample: "No. It's going to take both of us to eliminate it." he said continueing his on slaught against the hollow. With one final swing he decapitated the final one and looked to Hito. "Division Three is the only resistance against that thing. Me and you, are the only resistance." he said not wanting to believe the words he spoke. Kazeshini flew back to his hands and he stood there eteing the Vastro Lorde. "Let me attack first, after I attack, follow up with your own." he said kicking off the air toward the target. It was going to take alot to beat it, maybe they couldn't...Maybe this would be their final battle together. Yet, Mikaru wasn't sad at all. Who better than one of his greatest friends, his Lieutenant. Mikaru got close the Vastro Lorde and swung his right blade at it hoping to cleave it's arm off. The Vastro Lorde easily took the blow, but didn't flinch. It turned it's head toward Mikaru and squinted it's yellow eyes before slamming it's fist into Mikaru's stomach. Mikaru was taken by suprise and hit the ground hard, tossing in the air and hitting it over and over as he flew hundreds of yards. Finally, hit feet touched ground during the roll and he kicked upward, doing a back flip.
He laned on one of the very few buildings that weren't destroyed, a cresent moon shining in the background. "Maybe I've underestimated myself." he thought as his grip on the right chain tightened. He manuvered his hand above his head and made Kazeshini begin spinning. His body glew with a green aura as he fired his right blade at the Vastro Lorde. It launched through the night sky, turning toward the right in sort of a loop and went to slam against the Vastro Lorde's neck. He caught the rod of his Zanpakutou and threw it right back. Mikaru caught it in his hand and grinned. "So, that wont work eh?" he said leaping after him again. This time he was launching through the air. He threw his left blade and watched as it spun around the Vastro Lordes hands and Legs, leaving his chest open.
Mikaru shunpod above him and began his decen, his right blade rose high into the sky. Mikaru was now in range, and swung down on the Vastro Lorde's chest. He instantly ripped into it, grinding down to it lower abdamon. The power he put behind it made a gash behind the Vastro Lorde where Mikaru cut him, everything behind that slice was engraved with a massive slice. "You lose." he said with a small laugh. He turned around and began walking back to Hito. "Hey! It wasn't that bad after all!" he shouted to Hito. A few seconds later, a cero blew through Mikaru's chest and he began falling down toward the shattered world below.
Mikaru's eyes were wide. "He..got...me...?" he thought as came to a decision. "I'm going to fight until i die, before I lose air, before I die from blood loss." Mikaru tugged hard on his left chain, watching it unwrap from the Vastro Lordes legs. When the blade reached, it sliced off the Vastro Lorde's right leg from the knee down. "Get Inoue!" he shouted to Hito as he leaped back toward the hollow. Mikaru and the Vastro Lorde clashed, each sending fatal blows to one another. Each strike they made sent shockwaves through the air. It began to rain, it dripping down his body soaking him with a cold fealing. Blood fell to the ground below, his bleeding not stopping as each blow brought him closer and closer to his death.
"Hito! I hold him off for as long as possibal, if you want me to live...get Ino-!" he stopped as he lost the last of his breath. He continued fighting, getting dizzy and losing his vision. He threw oth of kazeshini's blades as he fell to the ground below. The Vastro Lorde took hold of both of them causing Mikaru to stop falling because of the chains he was holding. The Vastro Lorde began to slowly reel him in until he finally had him. He grabbed him by the throat and squeezed. Mikaru tried to scream but couldn't due to loss of air.
A flash of lightning could be seen in the background as he let Mikaru drop. While he was falling, Mikaru only had one resentment. "Suzume, I'm sorry for failing you...I wish I could have given you the life you deserved...but I couldn't. Farwell..." he said staring up at the hollow as he fell. The Vastro Lorde gripped Mikaru's Zanpakutou in his hand, then chunked the right one down toward Mikaru. It sliced through rain drops on it's way toward him. Kazeshini's right blade sliced into Mikaru's left arm, then cleaved it off before he could even bleed. Mikaru continued falling, not able to feal anything. he hit the ground hard, fealing his leg break on impact. He got up after a few seconds and began limping away not sure of what he was doing, he didn't know where of who he was by this point. Mikaru looked up at the Vastro Lorde, seeing Kazeshini's left blade flash before his eyes before seeing nothing at all. A large crack of thunder lighting the sky, as Mikaru's limp body lay there in the rain.
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Masorin
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| | Subject: Re: Alfonse Alborn Fri May 07, 2010 4:45 pm | |
| your history is A too short for a captain class character wheres the information like joining the gotie thirteen, and being a member of a squad? and B reads like an rp sample we want an overview of your characters life not a scene from it.
that pick your using for your character is already a cannon character in bleach you cant use it for an oc. if im mistaken and this is not an OC character please provide a link to bleach wiki becouse i looked up the name and didn't find anything.
your character is litterally a master of everything? i dont like that please modify so your not nearly as broken everyone has some weaknesses but you seem to have everything mastered.
please provide an rp sample for the character you will be rping. unless told otherwise by another admin | |
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